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	<title>Comments on: 6 ways to improve your writing</title>
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		<title>By: Lisa</title>
		<link>http://blog.penelopetrunk.com/2004/09/20/6-ways-to-improve-your-writing/#comment-58983</link>
		<dc:creator>Lisa</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 19 Apr 2007 17:25:41 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I just came across this and appreciate it. I am relatively new to blogging and in the midst of finding the right voice, tone and really rethinking step 1 - what is my audience. What started out as a place for me to journal is now evolving into somethihg else. I find that I enjoy writing more than I had thought. One thing I enjoy about your posts is your rhythm and I was pleased to see that addressed above.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I just came across this and appreciate it. I am relatively new to blogging and in the midst of finding the right voice, tone and really rethinking step 1 - what is my audience. What started out as a place for me to journal is now evolving into somethihg else. I find that I enjoy writing more than I had thought. One thing I enjoy about your posts is your rhythm and I was pleased to see that addressed above.</p>
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		<title>By: Penelope Trunk</title>
		<link>http://blog.penelopetrunk.com/2004/09/20/6-ways-to-improve-your-writing/#comment-641</link>
		<dc:creator>Penelope Trunk</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 08 Jul 2006 15:46:07 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thanks, Stephanie. You bring up the point of linking style. It's still early in my blogging life, and I wasn't sure if it was good or bad to link to one's own commentary. For example, at a cocktail party, quoting one's own writing is so boorish. 

But I noticed that Techdirt (http://www.techdirt.com) references itself all the time, as a way to show a cointinuing conversation. I like that.

Add that to the list of things that are social genius online and socially incompetent offline. 
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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks, Stephanie. You bring up the point of linking style. It&#039;s still early in my blogging life, and I wasn&#039;t sure if it was good or bad to link to one&#039;s own commentary. For example, at a cocktail party, quoting one&#039;s own writing is so boorish. </p>
<p>But I noticed that Techdirt (http://www.techdirt.com) references itself all the time, as a way to show a cointinuing conversation. I like that.</p>
<p>Add that to the list of things that are social genius online and socially incompetent offline.</p>
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		<title>By: Stephanie Roberts</title>
		<link>http://blog.penelopetrunk.com/2004/09/20/6-ways-to-improve-your-writing/#comment-640</link>
		<dc:creator>Stephanie Roberts</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 07 Jul 2006 23:37:42 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Just found this post by way of a link you included in a new post this week.   Thanks for including old content in your new blog. Good stuff.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Just found this post by way of a link you included in a new post this week.   Thanks for including old content in your new blog. Good stuff.</p>
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